Poem : We were in a place where nothing was the right thing to say. We were stolen flowers from gardens along the moon-bright bay.
I often find that brevity asks more of the reader than abundance. This poem trusts silence to carry part of its meaning, and I enjoyed that quiet confidence. Thank you for sharing.
As her aqua eyes follow their flight…
Love this, incredible opening!
"We were in a place
where nothing
was the right thing to say."
The form and flow really work here. Very moving.
„nowhere was the right place to be” - beautiful x
This is a poem one wants to stay inside of. Changed my day.
I often find that brevity asks more of the reader than abundance. This poem trusts silence to carry part of its meaning, and I enjoyed that quiet confidence. Thank you for sharing.
As her aqua eyes follow their flight…
Love this, incredible opening!
"We were in a place
where nothing
was the right thing to say."
The form and flow really work here. Very moving.
„nowhere was the right place to be” - beautiful x
This is a poem one wants to stay inside of. Changed my day.